Friday, March 29, 2013

Final Project Pitch

For my final project, I would like to do a story about a girl waiting for her fiance to come home from work. He is an hour late, and she has been calling his phone constantly, but there is no answer. She has become concerned so she has contacted family members and friends. Then she calls his boss to see if he stayed late, and the boss says he left on time per usual. Hundreds of ideas cross her mind: is he cheating on me? is he ok? does he have a surprise? Then, she gets a phone call and answers the phone immediately. After a few seconds, she drops he phone on the floor and runs out of the room.

Later on she appears in a hospital, asks the receptionist where to go, and then follows the doctor down the hallway to the room. She enters the room and sees her fiance laying in the bed, half conscious. They talk and the plot develops (not entirely sure on all of the details of this portion). She takes a break from the room as he gets more tests done and meets a couple in the room next door. As the conversation develops between them and the nurse gives her new information, they come up with an idea. The couple next door lets the girl and her fiance borrow their wedding rings and the chaplain comes up from the chapel. They get married in the hospital room, but as they say their vows, you can hear the fiances breath getting heavier and heavier and see his health deflating in the monitors. Finally, after their kiss, he ends up dying.

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